Snow
Fall would be an amazing story if it had been written in a traditional
fashion. From a narrative point-of-view, the story is captivating due to the
content as well as well-written due to the changing voices and variety of
description, the foreshadowing and suspense. The author did an excellent job of
obtaining all perspectives and weaving them in such a way that the reader cares
about what happens to these people, and can “see” the terrain of the mountain
and feel the extreme loss, panic, pain of the skiers and their families. On top
of all of that, the story was well-organized. This type of story, with the
varying voices, background stories, locations, and events could easily become
muddled and disorganized, but the “chapters”, smooth transitions and clear
movement of the story made this an excellent piece. Rebecca Greenfield’s review
on The Wire, summed up the
technological integration perfectly: “What's striking is how smoothly the illustrated tale transitions
into even more full-bleed-style graphics that are as gorgeous as they are
useful.”
Now, recognizing that this is not a
story written in a traditional fashion, this piece is taken to an even higher
level of excellence in reading experience. The reader has experienced the
avalanche with these people after they have read/watch/interacted with this
story.
This work with integrating technology
– video, images, historical information – does not seem forced. Many examples
of technology-integrated journalism seem like they include integrated features
for the sake of including technology, not because it truly enhances the reading
experience. “The
integration of multimedia in Snow Fall
was purposeful. As New York Times
Graphics Director Steve Duenes explained in an interview with Poynter Online, they were looking to
find ways to create a seamless experience, ‘…So it didn’t feel like you were
taking a detour, but the multimedia was part of the one narrative flow’” (Rue The Snow Fall Effect).
The review of Snow
Fall on Storify was interesting – in keeping with the theme of
technological integration, the review was presented through tweets that the
crew and critics had sent out. This seemed effective to an extent. Definitely
gained some information about the story with this format, but overall it seemed
unnecessary and gimmicky as a follow-up to the article. This review made me
recall a topic we discussed on the first day of class – the use of technology
when it was a benefit, not just for the sake of using technology.
I was surprised by the some of the reviews that Snow Fall received – the backlash seemed
like more than I had expected after I was done reading the piece. I understand
that from a business point-of-view, the article breadth and depth cannot be
repeated on a daily basis, but the reviewers that implied the technological
integration was distracting were far off from what I had experienced. I was
also very surprised by the reviews of Shark
and Minnow. I thought the moving videos beneath the text in that story were
much more distracting and made for more difficult reading there. What did you
think? Who did it better?
My lingering question after reading through these
interactive stories and their reviews is this: what will happen to traditional
reading? I know Derek Thompson of The
Atlantic doesn’t foresee this type of labor-intensive journalism becoming
the norm, but there are many “less-involved” examples of this interactive media
out there. I’m not trying to put on granny glasses and point a crooked, angry
finger at the next generations of readers, but I’m just curious – how will this
type of interactive, multi-media reading effect our up and coming readers that
are born with this being the norm? Will it be easy for them to sit and read a
classic novel when they are the ones coming up with images in their heads? Or,
more positively, will this spark curiosity in readers to go and find
information on the time period and part of the world to which their novels are
referring?
Also I’m torn on this topic: I like the idea of stories and writing
being more accessible to audiences – meaning, in this case, people who aren’t
the best readers are aided by the pictures and the videos. But, I’m also not
sure that is a great goal for readers. I know we’ve already moved toward the
quick “snip-its” of information for today’s reader who only spends a few
minutes looking at each Web-based article before moving on to the next. This
reader is found in the classroom too, having trouble concentrating on a novel
or a longer educational article for long periods of time. Is it ignorant and
futile to want to hang on to the reader that can concentrate on text for longer
than 10 minutes? Perhaps that is not a useful skill any longer. Perhaps in the
real world, this is not something that is advantageous and I’m holding onto a
lost skill/art. What do you think?
I too found "Snowfall" to be a captivating story and one that seemed to flawlessly incorporate multiple digital tools. However, I did find the breadth of this narrative to be daunting and eventually I found myself focusing more on the videos and interactive elements and less on the actual text. I must say that I definitely enjoyed reading "Snowfall" more than I enjoyed "A Game of Shark and Minnow" as I found the latter to be distracting and choppy. I am curious to know how someone would include these multimedia media articles into the classroom. Would they be strictly kept to journalism? Or would other subjects begin using these types of projects as well. I also wonder how a teacher would go about using these in a classroom: as a mentor text for their own project? As an article to simply read? Or something else entirely? It would be interesting to hear from a teacher who has used something like this in their classroom to see how they applied it and made it relevant for students.
ReplyDeleteRayna, great post!
ReplyDeleteI could not agree with you more on the "Snow" and "Minnows" post. I also read the negative comments about "Snow," and I couldn't believe it. Yes, it was more expensive and can't be implemented in weekly/daily reporting. But, it's not supposed to be. I thoroughly enjoyed it more than "Minnows" because it gave me that feeling of intimacy that you were talking about. I was part of the story, drawn in. In "Minnows" I felt like I didn't even know the people, I wasn't intimate with it. Yes, it was still a great article, but I just don't think it was as impactful.
I loved your comment about not wanting to put on your granny glasses, I have felt that way many times while reading these blog articles. I too believe that it is important for students need to be able to use traditional texts. The only way that I can describe the feeling I have with over-using the technology in the classroom is the "shiny complex." If students see pictures, media, and all of the other fireworks and bangs, how can we expect them to still find traditional text informational? I know the article talked about the need to use both the traditional and technological points of view in the classroom, but when do we hit that point where kids are so used to the technology that they forego all traditional text. I think that is a slippery slope.